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Thank you for loving my work knowing that is so encouraging to me
posted by
Thomas_Cornish
on March 8, 2008 at 2:13 PM
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you're are welcome and thank you for directing me to this piece
you and your and writing are a perfect example how beautiful it is when talent is used properly. I love the way you allow your thoughts and feeling to really work together
posted by
Thomas_Cornish
on March 8, 2008 at 2:05 PM
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I found this poem fascinating, it grabbed me at the first line and did not let me go till the end. I have news for you li'l flappergirl, Emily Dickinson had nothing on you. You are a story teller at heart and this is your story you are telling . I loved the line: "feeling nothing became safer for me,than feeling every beat, rhythm and pulsation from within." Such a beautiful way of putting it. Please do not allow yourself to get numb. You have such exquisite , tender way of expressing feelings, someone like you should never give up, no matter how much it sometimes hurts you. Writing can be healing if you let your heart speak for you. Thank you for sharing that beautiful poem.
posted by
Sinome
on March 7, 2008 at 5:13 PM
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A great poem,
something that makes you want to answer all those questions too...
Although I'd probably strive for a shorter answer, after all you are what you are, not what you were or what you're supposed to be, and that makes things much less complicated. And the same about the feelings.
posted by
hagi
on March 7, 2008 at 1:12 PM
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I do not see you much here
Good piece of writing.
posted by
Kayzzaman
on March 7, 2008 at 8:57 AM
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Flapper
This is fabulous. You take us on your own personal journey in answering the question "What do you feel" and I enjoyed how you crafted the journey. Yes... sometimes there is a price to "shining" but I think as we get older we have the ability to shine again because the reaction of others will be very different. Shine on!
posted by
Troosha
on March 7, 2008 at 7:29 AM
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Great take for this awesome poem. It was a delight to read! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 7, 2008 at 6:14 AM
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I really loved this. It had be sitting on the edge of my seat
posted by
Samantha39
on March 6, 2008 at 8:13 PM
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Re:
thanks my friend, they all come from the heart, but this one I had to dig a little deeper, you know.
posted by
flappergirl
on March 6, 2008 at 8:04 PM
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Oh this is a powerfully rich prolifically poignant poem. This is very moving. I am speechless.
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 6, 2008 at 8:02 PM
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