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that was an awesome piece of work
posted by
quietguy7
on March 6, 2008 at 3:21 AM
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ah that feeling of when it's regained...this is awesome as an allegory on love ~ powerful ~Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 5, 2008 at 8:36 PM
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so touching dear
posted by
Samantha39
on March 5, 2008 at 8:03 PM
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Beautiful poem, I adore the metafors and the profound content. Tha sad thing is that sometimes the wind takes the paper, and one stands there with an empty hand and the feeling of loss...
posted by
Sinome
on March 5, 2008 at 6:25 PM
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Blue
Love
is that fragile, isn't it? Hold onto that paper....
posted by
Troosha
on March 5, 2008 at 11:39 AM
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You said it all! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 5, 2008 at 8:44 AM
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