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bluehands ~
Thank you for your poignant comment. Peace and blessings.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on March 2, 2008 at 6:28 PM
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soul sickness
the ache the pain the sorrow the freedom of ebing alone and yet one with the universe....i love this poem.
posted by
thecryptkeeper
on March 2, 2008 at 5:01 PM
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yafanna ~
I write what I feel ...but some people don't feel what I write. Thank you very much for reading and commenting on this piece. Peace and blessings. ~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on March 1, 2008 at 7:06 PM
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XLPOLICE ~
Thank you for visiting and commenting. Please visit my blog again. ~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on March 1, 2008 at 7:02 PM
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sam ~
I appreciate your comments very much. Thank you! ~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on March 1, 2008 at 7:00 PM
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teddy ~
I always feel honored when a reader expresses some connection with one of my poems. I am glad you found something in this poem that you needed. Peace and blessings. ~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on March 1, 2008 at 6:57 PM
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Sinome ~
Your comments are most kind. Peace and blessings. ~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on March 1, 2008 at 6:44 PM
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jfm32 ~
Welcome to my blog. Come again! ~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on March 1, 2008 at 6:42 PM
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jacenta ~
Thank you for visiting my blog. I appreciate your comment. ~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on March 1, 2008 at 6:40 PM
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Dave ~:
Thank you for your kind comment. ~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on March 1, 2008 at 6:38 PM
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Wonderful !
I'm sad for those who don't understand poetic language. Your piece is wonderful. I imagine it took a lot of emotion to create it.
posted by
yafanna
on March 1, 2008 at 5:50 PM
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I THE WAY THE WORD FLOWED IN THIS POEM KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK
posted by
XLPOLICE
on March 1, 2008 at 5:40 PM
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Sterling and so very alive with imagery that took me to a different level. A fine and breath taking poem my friend! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 1, 2008 at 1:33 PM
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The poem stands well as it is. my friend...had me in thoughts of my mother
and all of the things I could never think to place upon her gravestone...as I read your poem, I was stunned to find the words that would not freely come to mind...well done!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on March 1, 2008 at 11:28 AM
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Bravo!! I found this poem superb, one of the best I have read in here. Wonderfully written and well thought out, I am in awe of you :-)
posted by
Sinome
on March 1, 2008 at 11:08 AM
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Tho I might identify with you specific journey
the writing seems a little lagbrious to me--sometomes doubling up on wasted words: within 1st two stanzas "nectar" whats that? Birds and Bees and 19th century imagry>if you are talking about somthing sweet, then tell me in my everday language. Then you have "spirit wings". Since when is wings not spiritual?
I think you have to make a decision if you are going to write in 19th/20th century form and imagry, or do you want to communicate to someone like me?
The poem starts out a little dark, but I like how you work your rhythm of thought back into the light. The fact is, if I were not a reader, I would have stopped at your 2nd stanza--just how you were using word/images.
Thus my only question is who you are writing to--the past of to me?
Since I don't go back and read my posted comments, best thing to do is email me. I'm sure you will have some comment--and I'll be looking foward to them
John
posted by
jfm32
on March 1, 2008 at 10:30 AM
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soulspeaker
This is absolutely wonderful!
posted by
jacentaOld
on March 1, 2008 at 10:00 AM
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This is wonderfully written! A classic piece!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 1, 2008 at 9:42 AM
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