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ok, i wrote some bullshit that got "lost"
my point was:
#1 THANK YOU VERY MUCH
#2 YOU'RE ALL WRONG
i'm fucking great, yes
self-proclaimed
and yet i'm a loser
in shit world.
posted by
Sudanym_
on March 1, 2008 at 5:10 PM
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A loser cannot express himself like this. You must raise your head and be the fine you are! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 1, 2008 at 8:09 AM
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be happy, every thing will work well for you....
posted by
star4sky5
on February 29, 2008 at 9:13 PM
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C'mon patmanplus! You're running from yourself. You are the one, and only you, to generate that feeling of adequacy you're missing. No-one else but you can care 100% for you. Wake up to the schemes afloat in the world to make you feel like zero! You have to see through these schemes! I lost all of them! And you know what, they got what they deserved. They had to be special to have me! They were not! Don't depend on anybody to validate you or make you feel worthy! God is there to help you regain your strenght! Take care!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on February 29, 2008 at 8:55 PM
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Determined loser by whom? Your poem here is very passionate. Write on!!! You'll come around ~ because you had 'it'...God, I am understanding by your writing here...and you'll never lose that, Him... That pearl is still there within you...it's shining. Write on!!! Ginsberg, an old poet, wrote of ~Howl...howling... and the snow, oh my gosh, snow and cold...thats another subject. ~Ely
posted by
elysianfields
on February 29, 2008 at 6:07 PM
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