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Your poem makes me feel nostalgic about my old days as a child.Indeed it was far better than nowadays even if people were poor
posted by
adventurer02
on June 9, 2016 at 1:06 AM
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Great work! I love it.
Damon
posted by
Damond
on February 29, 2008 at 2:12 PM
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amazing amazing work
posted by
Thomas_Cornish
on February 28, 2008 at 11:00 PM
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Well thought for being a "youngester". With all of us who have read this maybe you can still change the world one person at a time! Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment!
posted by
Wigopa_
on February 28, 2008 at 7:17 PM
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The world could use more such naivete
Such reflections make me think of that old Frank Capra classic "It's a Wonderful Life" and the nightmarish Pottersville that comes from there being no George Bailey to stop it.
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on February 28, 2008 at 1:31 PM
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Very astute for such a youngster. I got the feel for a song here as well. sam
posted by
sam444
on February 28, 2008 at 11:17 AM
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Bless you .. i hope you didn't change much as you grew older.
posted by
Angesom_AG
on February 28, 2008 at 10:58 AM
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good old days
I can hardly believe that this was a "young" effort, it's so mature, particularly the last line. Thanks for reading my poem and commenting. Much appreciated.
posted by
vogue
on February 28, 2008 at 8:09 AM
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Trene-this is/was extremely well done! Sounds like 'wise head on young
shoulders'>Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on February 28, 2008 at 7:05 AM
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Great ideas...
nicely written
posted by
lionreign
on February 28, 2008 at 7:02 AM
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I like this rhymety rhyme poetry!!!
posted by
Straightforward
on February 28, 2008 at 5:56 AM
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Young, yes! -- but naive
...only in the sense that you lacked experience. Your insight was that of someone much older -- knowing the problems of society (and wanting to fix them.) Very well done! 
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on February 28, 2008 at 5:49 AM
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Your wisdom
exceeded your years. Truthfully, this is how change happens!
posted by
Yeshuan
on February 28, 2008 at 5:02 AM
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