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Re: Well it's still inspiration my dear Chris!
Thank you very much mariaki! I'm so pleased you still find it so.Chris.

posted by Scramble on February 28, 2008 at 6:54 AM | link to this | reply

Well it's still inspiration my dear Chris!
well done and thank you

posted by mariaki on February 28, 2008 at 4:47 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Hi Soul Builder--so would I have been lost-if someone else wrote it!
Chris.

posted by Scramble on February 28, 2008 at 2:29 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Hello Sinome--Thank you so much! I laughed at your comment-at one time
I actually probably would have done that!!Chris.

posted by Scramble on February 28, 2008 at 2:28 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Hello Original Influence-thank you so much! Chris.

posted by Scramble on February 28, 2008 at 2:27 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Cool,
Hi Yeshuan--Thank you! I felt I should put the explanation for-if I was reading it-(written by someone else-I would have been totally lost!) Chris.

posted by Scramble on February 28, 2008 at 2:26 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Chris..those feathers can be deceiving..:) The wind loves to play tricks...
Hi Rumored--yes that's the very 'magic'-about the wind isn't it? Whether it's 'playing tricks'-or-'deceiving us'-same both ways.Thank you.Chris.

posted by Scramble on February 28, 2008 at 2:24 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Hi teddy-many thanks! Chris.

posted by Scramble on February 28, 2008 at 2:23 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Hello Elyse--Many thanks indeed! Chris.

posted by Scramble on February 28, 2008 at 2:22 AM | link to this | reply

Re: thank you so much.....
Hi MYNenricoMYN--many thanks indeed--writers ALL have to start from somewhere-and I have said-many times-you are NOT NOTHING-by comparrison with me or anyone else!!! Always remember that and VALUE yourself and your work! God bless-Chris.

posted by Scramble on February 28, 2008 at 2:21 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Scramble,
Thanks very much TAPS! Chris.

posted by Scramble on February 28, 2008 at 2:19 AM | link to this | reply

Re: How kind of you Sam-thank you! Chris.

posted by Scramble on February 28, 2008 at 2:18 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks! Otherwise, I would be lost!!!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on February 27, 2008 at 9:09 PM | link to this | reply

So the strange white bug turned out to be a feather, the point is you have  the curiosity of life that most of us have already lost.  I would have just said "eughhhh" and hit it with something.  lol,  just kidding I believe life is sacred  Beautiful lil poem.

posted by Sinome on February 27, 2008 at 9:09 PM | link to this | reply

Great minds envision interesting things!

posted by Original_Influence on February 27, 2008 at 6:52 PM | link to this | reply

Cool,
the explanation made it even better!

posted by Yeshuan on February 27, 2008 at 5:50 PM | link to this | reply

Chris..those feathers can be deceiving..:) The wind loves to play tricks...
with whatever it can......

posted by Rumor on February 27, 2008 at 4:45 PM | link to this | reply

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on February 27, 2008 at 4:38 PM | link to this | reply

How fun ~ I like this haiku (and your explanation is fun and funny...I can see - imagine) ~Elyse

posted by elysianfields on February 27, 2008 at 4:35 PM | link to this | reply

thank you so much.....
thank you for visiting my blog..... thank you for spending sometime on an apprentice like me!!!!!! i know i am nothing compare to writers like you!!

posted by MYNenricoMYN on February 27, 2008 at 3:12 PM | link to this | reply

Scramble,
I love it when poets write about anything and everything that they see.  Great explanation.  LOL

posted by TAPS. on February 27, 2008 at 2:27 PM | link to this | reply

I think it is endearing. A wonderful story!  sam

posted by sam444 on February 27, 2008 at 1:18 PM | link to this | reply