Go to a suicidal broken hearted........
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- Go to i think its really over...LEAN
Beautiful poem! but I feel I have to tell you that I am sorry you are so sad, You are a wonderful writer, and that Lean ( I loved the red letters, like blood, spelling her name
), well... Its her loss. Cheer up dear, time cures all and one day you will get up and the pain will be dull like an old football injury that healed years ago, and then you will go on, and the thoughts of Lean will only bother you once in a while, on rainy days or cold winter nights
posted by
Sinome
on February 27, 2008 at 9:20 PM
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A heartfelt piece that brings to mind
similar thoughts....wishing you well.
posted by
Original_Influence
on February 27, 2008 at 6:55 PM
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So sorry you are feeling so much pain! You have written well about it!
Very often-once the tears have flown then subsided-we feel a little lighter--I hope this will be so-for you! God bless.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on February 27, 2008 at 1:52 PM
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Very heartfelt!!
Beautifuly written though!
posted by
tyleness
on February 27, 2008 at 8:03 AM
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Good morning MyNenricoMYN! I am sorry for your pain. Time is a healing factor. You must find yourself in the love of one's self and the beauty of the world will return even though this is a trying experience. sam
posted by
sam444
on February 27, 2008 at 5:03 AM
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Great!
posted by
BC-A
on February 27, 2008 at 2:21 AM
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I have thought many times that life sucks and I'd rather not try anymore so I feel your pain in this verse. It's a feeling that many of us have experienced. The feeling of hopelessnes when you love someone so dearly and they dont love you back. Learn to love yourself and you'll find the most reliable love in the world then good things will come your way.
posted by
Trene
on February 27, 2008 at 2:15 AM
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