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I beieve this is very well written and see no need to change a thing
it's all there - the emotion, the confusion, the fear even though the war is over; is it?? Thanks for sharing; good luck and take care
posted by
mariaki
on February 27, 2008 at 3:24 AM
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good job good luck
posted by
spinner
on February 26, 2008 at 7:18 PM
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Are
wether,
countries, and
hero's Australian spellings or errors? Otherwise, it's a very personal account of war. I think it's excellent work. I don't know if the spellings are correct in Australia. Sometimes, the
About Me pages are hard to remember after you click on
add a comment. It's Australia? Or, I ask about the spellings for whatever region of the world you reside. In any event, good luck with the contest.
posted by
BC-A
on February 26, 2008 at 6:14 PM
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Beautiful work!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on February 26, 2008 at 6:03 PM
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Very nicely done. I pulled in and I felt every emotion.
posted by
banzonvilla
on February 26, 2008 at 5:47 PM
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How are you
this is a powerful piece wow thank you thank you even though I'm not a solider
posted by
Thomas_Cornish
on February 26, 2008 at 4:08 PM
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I really like it
posted by
Samantha39
on February 26, 2008 at 4:06 PM
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