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Awe a Dream
I love to dream
posted by
Rhisiart_Inside_Out
on February 25, 2008 at 7:08 PM
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It was good to read a poem with punctuation. It allowed me to feel the imagery and experience the poem with correct pauses. I didn't feel like I needed to hurry. The contrast of dark to like and the accentuated dream was marvelous. Congratulations! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 25, 2008 at 6:34 PM
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great poem
posted by
AlienFemale
on February 25, 2008 at 3:29 PM
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Very beautiful poem! Inspiring!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on February 25, 2008 at 3:25 PM
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I have just added you to my favorites.
posted by
Transcendental_Child
on February 25, 2008 at 2:07 PM
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Nice! Inspirational too!
posted by
Sincerity_Anna
on February 25, 2008 at 10:23 AM
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