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Hi there.I believe that many of us can relate to and understand your poem!
I also-very strongly believe that-simply because you have written/are writing--you are basically anxious to find your way-to survive! Keep writing--keep writing--keep writing-it doesn't matter what it is-or even if it makes sense to us readers-or not! My theory is-that-as we write-whatever is 'hurting' us-will flow out of the body-down through your arms-hands-fingers-then out through the pen/pencil/keyboard!The more times you write-it will get a tiny bit easier! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on February 25, 2008 at 8:43 AM
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when you write it should always be from the heart and if your like me at all I write best when I'm sad and thats a little sad but it's an outlet which can work miracles. It does for me anyway.
posted by
Trene
on February 25, 2008 at 5:34 AM
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Read this:
http://www.blogit.com/Blogs/Blog.aspx/Scramble/
posted by
AardigeAfrikaner
on February 25, 2008 at 5:21 AM
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Pardon the many errors in my comment
I really want to help and there is no time for formality and correction. Please try and follow my simple advise. It has worked for me.
posted by
AardigeAfrikaner
on February 25, 2008 at 5:17 AM
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This poem is REAL POETRY FROM THE HEART
You write exactly what you feel. No flowery nonsense. The simple truth of the matter is clear. I've felt like dying often. I've been in and out of depression numerous times. You must understand that you can never let yourself become "crumpled" by what others do or don't. Oyou should calue anothers perspective, but if someone lies to you, they are not worth your attention. I'm not sure who you are writing about but even if you realy love someone and this person deceives you, you cannot let that ruin your life. Life is prescious. I know you do not think so right now, but there is a way out of this situation. It is not easy, nothing worthwhile is easy in the beginning, especialy while you are down and out. A very good remedy, although a temporary relief, is to go outside and simply watch anything that gets your attention. Do not judge anything you see. Just watch. Take a walk and look at all the other living beings around you. None of them have perfect lives according to the judgements of people (the worldly people). You do not have to have a "perfect life".
posted by
AardigeAfrikaner
on February 25, 2008 at 5:15 AM
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