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I love your clever repetitions:
"Selfish self....", "tastes untasted..." very bold.
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on February 27, 2008 at 11:12 AM
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This poem is loaded with imagery, but the lines are so poignant and worldly! My favorite two are 'turning teardrops into star' and 'tempered by temptations flame'! These are incredible moving! I also felt like I was in the 18th to early 19th century company of poets! sam
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sam444
on February 25, 2008 at 12:08 PM
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