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wow, very nice
posted by
star4sky5
on February 22, 2008 at 5:59 AM
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"Shot through the heart ..." (Bon Jovi)
I love your romantic use of mechanical mythology.
It pierces my heart with sharp words of love.
posted by
BC-A
on February 20, 2008 at 4:36 PM
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A lovely piece! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 20, 2008 at 10:38 AM
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Very nice!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on February 20, 2008 at 7:55 AM
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