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                glad to hear that you are better!  enjoyed this piece, especially the ending!  
                
                    posted by
                    kmer
                     on March 1, 2008 at 4:40 PM
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                    Great imagery.  Glad you're better today.
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    ger_musser
                     on February 21, 2008 at 12:07 PM
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                    Pleased you're feeling better mama_joy! You're right-an 'off day' helps us
                
                to appreciate the 'good days'.This is truly lovely! Chris.

                
                    posted by
                    Scramble
                     on February 20, 2008 at 2:05 PM
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                I was lost in the imagery. This is a very fine poem.  My congratulations. I am so sorry you were not feeling well.  sam
                
                    posted by
                    sam444
                     on February 20, 2008 at 9:11 AM
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                    very pretty, very soft.......
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    majesticvisions
                     on February 20, 2008 at 7:02 AM
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                    Glad you're feeling better...this poem has great imagery and details!
                
                great job!
                
                    posted by
                    Ariala
                     on February 20, 2008 at 6:31 AM
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