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Painful read as I think I myself have experienced this
on a very technical note...ad some rythm into this poem and you'll have a masterpiece!
posted by
thecryptkeeper
on February 20, 2008 at 10:07 PM
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Excellent! a haunting, melancholic recount of the loss of love.
posted by
BC-A
on February 20, 2008 at 7:38 PM
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hopefully this heart rending poem will help you to let go. It is beautiful
but terribly sad, desperate even. I feel so bad for you my darling.
posted by
Kabu
on February 19, 2008 at 5:56 PM
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I would think walking away would be a far better alternative. You have captured the essence of the dread of loss in fervent imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 19, 2008 at 4:11 PM
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