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Thought provoking. Thank you for sharing.
posted by
ger_musser
on February 21, 2008 at 11:58 AM
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u got so right
posted by
star4sky5
on February 20, 2008 at 11:21 PM
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lestate
Let's state, lestate, that this is simply beautiful
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on February 20, 2008 at 10:58 PM
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Well written...
very deep. Loved it!!
posted by
tyleness
on February 20, 2008 at 10:16 PM
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good work lestate7 dear..............
nicely done....keep writing dear....
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on February 20, 2008 at 5:17 AM
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Less, sweetie, it will be OK, Wonderful poem :-)
posted by
Sinome
on February 19, 2008 at 6:07 PM
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I die a little each time there is a senseless tragedy.
Many souls are simply in need of love.
posted by
soulspeaker
on February 19, 2008 at 1:32 PM
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absolutely beautiful
the line "And only the hand of love, with the glove of God" is incredible my friend...God bless
posted by
quietguy7
on February 19, 2008 at 12:31 PM
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Yes-you are so right Lestate! Very well written. Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on February 19, 2008 at 8:34 AM
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And here it is
the truth in black and white; very powerful message here my friend; great work; thank you and God bless
posted by
mariaki
on February 19, 2008 at 2:35 AM
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Powerfully done
posted by
white-cossack
on February 18, 2008 at 10:43 PM
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Moves me to tears...
your voice carries a strength with passion that needs to be heard. Yes,
when all hope is gone...when love passes by those --- this is a
poignant write and I will carry a memory in my heart while I pray
this night. Thank you ~
posted by
elysianfields
on February 18, 2008 at 9:52 PM
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Lestate I love you to the ends of the earth. This poem gives me such an omnifarious feeling. I felt it to my bones. I am finding it difficult finding the appropriate words to give justice to the depth of this incredulous poem. Suffice to say that what I can't say carries the breadth! [Regarding your question, I have my poetry organized in booklets that friends read when they visit. Nothing professional. I usually give them away as well or publish in the church bulletin. I appreciate your inquiry and kind comments. I am truly humbled]. sam
posted by
sam444
on February 18, 2008 at 8:14 PM
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Very powerful!
It is sad, but true, that many of the spree-shooters could have been stopped with the right person loving them the right way at the right time.
posted by
Yeshuan
on February 18, 2008 at 8:04 PM
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