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posted by
AardigeAfrikaner
on February 15, 2008 at 3:18 AM
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Simple is better!! Good write!!!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on February 14, 2008 at 8:21 AM
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very good poem! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 14, 2008 at 3:41 AM
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hey really enjoyed this one
Very spiritual poem! I actually do all types of poetry: rhyming, haikus, non rhyming, free write. I love rhyming though because I think it puts the reader into a trance. Nice picture by the way, I must say you're one good looking aussie =) !!! my msn messenger is
dlsilvast53@hotmail.com ! i hardly ever use it though i'm more of an AOL IM guy. do you have that?
posted by
Resilience
on February 13, 2008 at 11:13 PM
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Well said! Well written!
posted by
tyleness
on February 13, 2008 at 9:55 PM
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wow
posted by
star4sky5
on February 13, 2008 at 9:41 PM
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