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then mission is accomplished

posted by polarcontradict on February 11, 2008 at 10:03 PM | link to this | reply

I get into the characters.

posted by BC-A on February 11, 2008 at 6:53 PM | link to this | reply

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thanx for all the comments. lol, Almost Half There and A Beautiful Pain are short stories i wrote. lol, there is though some mixing reality with fiction in both of them.

posted by polarcontradict on February 11, 2008 at 6:49 AM | link to this | reply

your entry
Very good build up of the story.

posted by vogue on February 11, 2008 at 6:25 AM | link to this | reply

I liked how you handled the dialogue in this entry. I don't know the extent of your incapacitation but getting out and about is important! sam

posted by sam444 on February 11, 2008 at 6:09 AM | link to this | reply