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Things are happening, now it is time to etch them in! Intriguing poem. sam
posted by
sam444
on February 9, 2008 at 7:22 PM
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Hmmm..this one's different..still nice, though ! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on February 9, 2008 at 5:15 PM
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Good Job!
Loved the line about the river not being able to turn and run!
Naked Pictures Of Voices In My Head
posted by
CRShelley
on February 9, 2008 at 5:08 PM
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