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hot, intense passion
A lot of poets are afraid to right about sex. I'm glad to see you were bold enough to give a shot, and let me tell you....you slam-dunked it! how come this one couldn't be for me? haha =)
posted by
Resilience
on February 9, 2008 at 5:00 PM
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Ahh..you surely captured lovers' ecstasy very sensually ! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on February 8, 2008 at 6:15 PM
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Written Well!!!
posted by
tyleness
on February 8, 2008 at 9:39 AM
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Rachael
Wow, I had a dream that echoed this poem the other night. Pretty intense! Makes me miss my man.
posted by
SEEDLINGS
on February 8, 2008 at 8:57 AM
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Your passion is revealed in your words! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 8, 2008 at 7:06 AM
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poem
I visited, as invited and I ask myself: is the poem about the same guy whose default setting is : lazyness? Thanks for your comment on my piece. Keep visiting and write more poems!
posted by
vogue
on February 8, 2008 at 5:44 AM
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