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wish you a happy Valentine......
posted by
star4sky5
on February 7, 2008 at 7:13 PM
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yo
Damn homie i just went through like ten of your poems without even breathing... their so effen awesome it's as if you manage to unfilter yourself completely... like you just let go and write and whatever comes out is what comes out and I DIG THAT. so cool.
But ain't dead dude! That very statement assumes God is an organism, which is not possible. God is absolutley everything, at everytime. I read once that if the universe was one big clock, God would the "tick."
posted by
ChrisJames
on February 7, 2008 at 4:35 PM
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thx soul and sam
Sorry i haven't read your stuff more lately. You're both quite good. i just had to move. Still not situated.
posted by
Sudanym_
on February 7, 2008 at 4:23 PM
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This was a poem. I like the questioning! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 6, 2008 at 8:09 PM
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Good poem!!!!!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on February 6, 2008 at 7:08 PM
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