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Well written ! Great style !
posted by
afzal50
on February 5, 2008 at 5:45 AM
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excellent!
This part has closure. It'll be interesting to see if you can continue your great section or chapter construction.
BC-A 
posted by
BC-A
on February 4, 2008 at 7:01 PM
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Can't wait to see what happened, were they blown up? Hurry, drop everythihng and write the part 3
Great story :-)
posted by
Sinome
on February 4, 2008 at 4:05 PM
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