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Listen, I love your style...I love your words, your movement throughout each poem...I can see, feel, they are all palpable with sensory movement...WRITE ON~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on March 22, 2008 at 6:28 PM | link to this | reply

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thanks sam! it was one of those days, sort of like yesterday, when I just had to write about everything I was experiencing!

posted by kmer on February 4, 2008 at 8:43 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Nice-I like this Kmer! Chris.
thank you, Chris!

posted by kmer on February 4, 2008 at 5:52 AM | link to this | reply

Re: nice imagery and good flow
I was waiting in the car while my husband looked over a work van he was thinking about purchasing.

posted by kmer on February 4, 2008 at 5:52 AM | link to this | reply


posted by Soul_Builder101 on February 3, 2008 at 9:08 PM | link to this | reply

The poem pulled me along and I didn't know what to expect but couldn't stop. The warm ending was very ingenuous. sam

posted by sam444 on February 3, 2008 at 2:24 PM | link to this | reply

Nice-I like this Kmer! Chris.

posted by Scramble on February 3, 2008 at 1:20 PM | link to this | reply

nice imagery and good flow

posted by quietguy7 on February 3, 2008 at 11:45 AM | link to this | reply