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posted by
afzal50
on February 1, 2008 at 6:02 PM
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Perfect composition! Great work!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on February 1, 2008 at 5:29 PM
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Re: This poem was for a dear friend not me
I have control of myself. I choose to put my life and trust in God. Sorry to hear you don't know him.
posted by
thoughtfulness
on February 1, 2008 at 4:49 PM
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Amen, there is a God, you are praying for all the right reasons, He will hear you! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 1, 2008 at 12:43 PM
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Help yourself.
This is a very touching poem that clearly comes from your heart. I just worry that people are so ready to give themselves up to a fantasy. There is no God. We need to find our own way in this world by being good human beings and caring for our fellow travellers thru life. To put one's life and faith into something that has been constructed by other human beings to explain away the uncomfortable fact of our mortality is to live a lie. There is no Zeus, no Thor, no Allha and no Christian God, these human constructs are sad delusions.
Take control of yourself.
Mavros.
posted by
Mavro
on February 1, 2008 at 12:04 PM
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You are definately on the right track...
posted by
KingKai
on February 1, 2008 at 11:18 AM
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Love your words!
"Stronger is he, who is in me....than he who is in the world!"
posted by
CRShelley
on February 1, 2008 at 11:05 AM
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