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constructive, i like imagery, change the lines to have meter!

posted by thecryptkeeper on February 19, 2008 at 2:26 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent! love
 A traditional type love poem that's refreshing.

posted by BC-A on February 1, 2008 at 5:37 PM | link to this | reply

I say excellent!!! Welcome!!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on February 1, 2008 at 7:49 AM | link to this | reply

Very well-meaning

posted by Kayzzaman on February 1, 2008 at 3:46 AM | link to this | reply