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Kayzzaman
Sounds to me like he was beset with regrets. Great work. There are so many times that darkness and chaos bring times that we later regret, repent of and hopefully learn from.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 31, 2008 at 9:29 PM
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Hmmm OK
I like it, strange image though, eating lotus ...Who cares, its a beautiful poem,
posted by
Sinome
on January 31, 2008 at 8:53 PM
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So well said...
posted by
star4sky5
on January 31, 2008 at 8:28 PM
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I felt that perhaps he took his eyes off his ambition for just a moment.
posted by
Kabu
on January 31, 2008 at 8:24 PM
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Hi Kaz, how have you been? I like the imagery in this poem. sam
posted by
sam444
on January 31, 2008 at 1:11 PM
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Lotus eater? Strange term!!!!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on January 31, 2008 at 1:00 PM
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I like it.
posted by
KetilWorld
on January 31, 2008 at 12:31 PM
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Wow! Very well done!
posted by
strat
on January 31, 2008 at 11:10 AM
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I got the idea
that the darkness was temporary and the tears were ones of relief.
Cee 
posted by
LadyCeeMarie
on January 31, 2008 at 11:10 AM
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Kayzz
So there's hope for all of us?
Stunning piece!
posted by
Troosha
on January 31, 2008 at 11:09 AM
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