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Re: I liked it
Married when I wrote it...Now I am going thru a divorce...
posted by
Berryjen
on February 6, 2008 at 10:49 AM
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Your optimistic last two lines says there is still hope in your soul. I like that.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on January 31, 2008 at 8:54 AM
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Good stuff, Berryjen. Nice scansion, good flow...
posted by
saul_relative
on January 31, 2008 at 12:14 AM
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I liked it
but i'm just confused are you single or married?
posted by
Resilience
on January 30, 2008 at 8:54 PM
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Great poem
posted by
David1Spirit
on January 30, 2008 at 8:52 PM
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