Go to My Journey
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profound
posted by
BC-A
on January 28, 2008 at 6:39 PM
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Well done!!!!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on January 28, 2008 at 1:37 PM
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posted by
afzal50
on January 28, 2008 at 3:03 AM
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This is a well conceived poem. I liked the set up, it drew me in immediately. sam
posted by
sam444
on January 28, 2008 at 2:48 AM
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there it is my dear staring right at you....
life is how we make of it my dear...it's been staring at you for you to take notice...you get lost somewhere but if you look deep in your heart you'll know you're lost within your own self...where life inside you have yearning for some real expression and appreciation...nice interpretation dear...write them down and unleash the dark spots within...splatter them all in paper away from you my love...keep writing...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on January 27, 2008 at 9:43 PM
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Very nice indeed
posted by
Kayzzaman
on January 27, 2008 at 9:23 PM
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