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posted by afzal50 on January 25, 2008 at 8:38 AM | link to this | reply

every word here is lovable........

This is the area in which I used to play

Roll down the hills all day long

Forget about school

Forget about homework

The soft green texture

Many beautiful flowers

No competition

Just plain fun

We'd roll until it got close to dark

Than soak up the glorious sunset

 



posted by star4sky5 on January 25, 2008 at 7:56 AM | link to this | reply

Astonishing,  took a trip back to childhood!  sam

posted by sam444 on January 25, 2008 at 7:03 AM | link to this | reply