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thank you ash, Ariala,7stars for the encouragement
posted by
QuailNest
on January 25, 2008 at 9:28 PM
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Felt like I was on my beach vacation, good job ! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on January 25, 2008 at 3:43 PM
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Great details and perfect for the children's book you mentioned...I'm not
a poet who likes rhymes, but you had great imagery and details in this that made me halt my distaste for rhymes long enough to enjoy this! LOL Plus, for children's books, rhymes are especially good!
posted by
Ariala
on January 25, 2008 at 9:18 AM
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wow
posted by
star4sky5
on January 25, 2008 at 8:16 AM
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extremely beautiful
posted by
quietguy7
on January 25, 2008 at 8:14 AM
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Ferret
I enjoyed the many
visuals you created... Some wonderful descriptions of the ocean, its foam, our toes within it, and so on.
posted by
Troosha
on January 25, 2008 at 7:31 AM
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You paint with your words...
posted by
wana_phils
on January 25, 2008 at 4:58 AM
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posted by
KaBooM62
on January 25, 2008 at 4:34 AM
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Well said!
posted by
afzal50
on January 25, 2008 at 2:26 AM
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delightful-IN Durban, I often had the combo-sunshine & Ocean. Thanx for fun
poem with a lilting rhythm that is at once serious and imparting your jovial soul.
Loved your profile and that you are Post-Evangelical. I may be privately & delicately evangelical in that I celebrate the presence of Jesus in my life. Shalom.good morning from the Eastern USA. Laydi-Deonils-Durbin
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on January 25, 2008 at 12:29 AM
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