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Thanks. Very poignant poem.
posted by
ger_musser
on January 25, 2008 at 7:15 PM
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Very meaningful
without being pretencious. I love your use of images. And you say you wrote this in a rush? Then it is true genious. I like when at the end you say"Thoughts shadowing us in an infernal silence " (a mental block, the absence of inspiration maybe? The emptiness of a mind full of despair), followed by "The melody of the universe shows us the way" giving hope that there is a way out of the hole , the feeling of order and goodness ever present, Wow, I love it!.
Be well
posted by
Sinome
on January 24, 2008 at 8:41 PM
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Shalom & Namasthe K-poet_ melody is in the chaos allover the Universe.If we
see this, there is hope despite even our human wickedness and egomaniacal greed and landlust. Shalom again Brother. neil
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on January 24, 2008 at 2:48 PM
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nice and spotaneous!
posted by
QuailNest
on January 24, 2008 at 2:26 PM
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meldoy of the univers
sometimes busy is the best way to write as one tends to think less and do more
posted by
kmer
on January 24, 2008 at 12:39 PM
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This is you being busy?????
why would you need time? you've done a great job!
posted by
lindo
on January 24, 2008 at 12:35 PM
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posted by
Soul_Builder101
on January 24, 2008 at 12:32 PM
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You were busy amd so wrote about being lulled from chaos... what's not to like?
posted by
pen_dragon
on January 24, 2008 at 11:04 AM
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posted by
afzal50
on January 24, 2008 at 9:40 AM
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It worked well Kayzzaman! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on January 24, 2008 at 9:34 AM
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WOW" melody of universe"
SO WELL ......ENJOYED IT.
posted by
star4sky5
on January 24, 2008 at 8:54 AM
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beautiful
posted by
quietguy7
on January 24, 2008 at 8:20 AM
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Melody of the universe
posted by
Oosthuizen
on January 24, 2008 at 6:43 AM
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Don't fret it worked just fine!!
thank you
posted by
mariaki
on January 24, 2008 at 6:31 AM
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Kaz, that was well scripted. sam
posted by
sam444
on January 24, 2008 at 6:28 AM
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Good Morning.......
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on January 24, 2008 at 5:35 AM
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