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Re: Re: WHO TOLD U ALL THESE BUDDY?????? NO HUMAN IS BAD....
THAT'S FINE......."you are a good writer"

posted by star4sky5 on January 23, 2008 at 9:55 PM | link to this | reply

Re: WHO TOLD U ALL THESE BUDDY?????? NO HUMAN IS BAD....
hey man i'm sorry if you felt offended by my poem "Make Amends."  However, I don't think you are truly grasping my message.  Some women when they are hurt group all men into one category, and I was basically saying "hey baby we aren't all bad."  It's a common cliche that's all, I was definitely not saying all people are generally bad.  I give everyone a fair shot until they lose my respect and everyone's deserves a second chance.

posted by Resilience on January 23, 2008 at 1:38 PM | link to this | reply

WHO TOLD U ALL THESE BUDDY?????? NO HUMAN IS BAD....

EVERY SINGLE SOUL IS GOOD FOR SOME ONE....SOME ARE GOOD TO SOME BODY, BUT SAME TIME BAD TO SOME ONE...

YOU GOT TO REMEMBER, OPPOSITES ATTRATCTS AND STAY TOGETHER,

SOME CHARACTERS CANNOT WORK TOGETHER .....SO IT'S HUMAN NATURE....

SOME TEASES WE TAKE, BUT OTHERS WE CAN'T TAKE........

BUT BE HONEST AND SINCERE....WHOM EVER YOU LOVE, WILL NOTICE IT...AND IT'S PAY WILL BE GREAT.

STARIGHT FORWARD.........SINCERITY....ARE THE KEYS.

posted by star4sky5 on January 23, 2008 at 8:08 AM | link to this | reply

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thanks for the comments.....as you know I am new to this whole blogit thing.  How does the money aspect work because I am getting viewed but not making any money?  Like do you know how it is calculated?  Or does it take like a week since I'm new?  I sound like a total rookie I know....haha.

posted by Resilience on January 23, 2008 at 6:49 AM | link to this | reply

good work welcome to blogit

posted by spinner on January 23, 2008 at 5:13 AM | link to this | reply

Nice!

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