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posted by
star4sky5
on January 20, 2008 at 4:09 PM
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Lady, this is one of the best I have ever read...so very good!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on January 20, 2008 at 4:03 PM
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Liked everything..
words, structure, content..well-done ! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on January 20, 2008 at 11:03 AM
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You have a theme--a metaphor all your own. Great use of diction too.Brava!
have a wonderful day NightMajik. SHALOM
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on January 20, 2008 at 5:50 AM
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The imagery was so well sculpted. You are the potter and the words are your wheel! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 19, 2008 at 12:47 PM
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That was beautiful!
Amazingly creative!
posted by
SomeoneElse
on January 19, 2008 at 11:12 AM
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very well done
posted by
quietguy7
on January 19, 2008 at 9:00 AM
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Night
Wow! Such creativity, beautiful imagery, and a masterpiece of introspection.
posted by
Troosha
on January 19, 2008 at 8:12 AM
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so beautiful......
posted by
star4sky5
on January 19, 2008 at 7:59 AM
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Beautiful ! WEll written!
posted by
afzal50
on January 19, 2008 at 7:19 AM
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Re: What refreshing poetry...no cliches and very strong voice and imagery!
Ariala, thank you so much for the wonderful comment! Appreciate it so much. =3
posted by
NightMajik
on January 19, 2008 at 5:17 AM
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What refreshing poetry...no cliches and very strong voice and imagery!
I really enjoyed this...You're quite talented!
posted by
Ariala
on January 19, 2008 at 5:12 AM
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