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Thanks for the advice - first time on Blog - didn't know what format was permissable - appreciate the heads up.
posted by
MiamiNewYork
on January 19, 2008 at 10:16 PM
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I love Miami. sam
posted by
sam444
on January 18, 2008 at 7:56 AM
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Hey, MiamNewYork. This is interesting but hard as hell to read. Break it
up into smaller pieces and paragraphs; make it more 'reader friendly.' Short paragraphs and newspaper style is best. Huge paragraphs are a turnoff for most people and you want those readers, because the clicks make you money. Good luck and write on...
posted by
saul_relative
on January 17, 2008 at 9:34 PM
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