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This is lovely, as usual
Also, I think it's potent, becuase just reading it makes me a bit sleepy, as it's quite calm and still.
posted by
NightMajik
on January 19, 2008 at 5:14 AM
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Re: Thank you so much-Soul Builder! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on January 18, 2008 at 6:02 AM
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Re: Hi CP-you're welcome-and thanks for looking in! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on January 18, 2008 at 6:01 AM
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posted by
Soul_Builder101
on January 17, 2008 at 7:20 PM
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thanks
posted by
contagion_publishing
on January 17, 2008 at 1:19 PM
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Re: scramble
Aahh bless Lilane! What kind of birds do you hear upon waking? Thanks for popping in! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on January 17, 2008 at 12:29 PM
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Re: Oh, how lovely,Chris..I could imagine going to sleep peacefully someplace..
Hello Ash--many thanks indeed for your very kind words! I appreciate them-very much.I don't think you need to go as far as an 'Indian Village'-to hear the beauty of our feathered frieands-(if you forgive me for saying so)-a tent by the river--a camp on a farm--in a barn on a quiet country lane! Thank you again.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on January 17, 2008 at 12:28 PM
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Re: Sam-how lovely of you to say such beautifull things!Thank you so much.
Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on January 17, 2008 at 12:24 PM
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Re: gorgeous.
Hi FineYoungSinger-thank you so much! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on January 17, 2008 at 12:22 PM
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Re: Scramble
Hi Troosha--very many thanks! I'm glad you like them. Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on January 17, 2008 at 12:22 PM
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scramble
sometimes they arent singing my tune
posted by
Lanetay
on January 17, 2008 at 12:05 PM
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Oh, how lovely,Chris..I could imagine going to sleep peacefully someplace..
and waking up at the sound of chirping birds at the crack of dawn..kinda like in an Indian village decades ago..your words paint such realistic imagery, and yes, you ARE getting better at it - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on January 17, 2008 at 10:16 AM
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Chris, you are becoming masterful with imagery. It seeps in my mew and comfortably rests! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 17, 2008 at 9:49 AM
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gorgeous.
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on January 17, 2008 at 9:40 AM
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Scramble
Oh, those little "songsters" - I love to hear them in the morning. You're getting very good at this!!!!
posted by
Troosha
on January 17, 2008 at 8:51 AM
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Re: Thank you so much Sue! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on January 17, 2008 at 8:37 AM
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star4sky5
on January 17, 2008 at 7:15 AM
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star4sky5
on January 17, 2008 at 7:15 AM
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