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There are times when we all feel like we're sinking in quicksand.  The good news is that we inevitably rise above it.... 

posted by Troosha on January 17, 2008 at 8:24 AM | link to this | reply

posted by star4sky5 on January 16, 2008 at 10:04 PM | link to this | reply

Nice work!!!!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on January 16, 2008 at 9:42 PM | link to this | reply

'Darkness slowly robbing my existence,' was dynamic. I felt the weight of the poem as I read, my shoulders got heavy. The saving grace was it ended with peace. Quite beautifully orchestrated.  sam

posted by sam444 on January 16, 2008 at 7:23 PM | link to this | reply

 In any situation, the melancholic tone of the poem leads in your readers to the narrator's emotion.

posted by BC-A on January 16, 2008 at 5:25 PM | link to this | reply

Profound !

posted by afzal50 on January 16, 2008 at 4:24 PM | link to this | reply

In quicksand
....it's the struggle that buries you! Great Job!

posted by CRShelley on January 16, 2008 at 4:09 PM | link to this | reply