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Mallards with their emaralds heads, a line for the ages. sam
posted by
sam444
on January 15, 2008 at 4:54 PM
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Are the last two lines yours? Regardless, they sum up the poem well. Great.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on January 15, 2008 at 3:55 PM
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Poem Has Meaning
The line about the ducks walking single file's cute. Besides its wildlife study value, your poem could have meaning about soldiers. But, I think your intent's to write about peaceful nature. peace.
posted by
BC-A
on January 15, 2008 at 3:37 PM
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And those ducks .....
...are never in a hurry. Good work!
posted by
CRShelley
on January 15, 2008 at 3:17 PM
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Hello
I just love "
chestnut-speckled spouses". Great description!
posted by
bettybec
on January 15, 2008 at 12:29 PM
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