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WoW! Such a lovely lovely poem in bouncing back in positivity despite the
pain sorrow and the pathos of it all. Kudos.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on January 15, 2008 at 10:22 PM
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Excellent poem. I so adored the break with take it all. It was so steadfast and actually brought imagery to life as opposed to feeling or simply seeing imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 15, 2008 at 3:01 PM
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posted by
star4sky5
on January 15, 2008 at 8:33 AM
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posted by
star4sky5
on January 15, 2008 at 8:33 AM
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Mariaki
What a fabulous Roosevelt quote – something to consider or live by. And you poem today was wonderful! Someone can “take it all” but the spirit bounces back.
posted by
Troosha
on January 15, 2008 at 8:11 AM
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Lovely
I particularly like the second stanza.
posted by
NightMajik
on January 15, 2008 at 5:03 AM
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Wonderful poem, Maria
posted by
Kayzzaman
on January 15, 2008 at 4:44 AM
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Hello mariaki! So very sad if this is personal to you-however-the writer
has 'risen from the fall'-Wonderfull! Beautifully written! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on January 15, 2008 at 4:36 AM
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