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Great poem

posted by RockWise on March 31, 2011 at 9:28 AM | link to this | reply

How nervous were you when you read this?  I think you had a good one here.   The ambiance was smooth and the feeling in reality touch me with great significance for I can fall into my own persona when engrossed within your thoughtful words!

posted by sam444 on January 15, 2008 at 2:15 PM | link to this | reply

Like the originality!

posted by springonion on January 15, 2008 at 9:42 AM | link to this | reply

Very good

posted by Kayzzaman on January 15, 2008 at 4:17 AM | link to this | reply

So fresh  

posted by lestate7 on January 15, 2008 at 2:07 AM | link to this | reply

I'd love to be the first....

...to compliment you on your first shared poetry. 

"genesis after genesis" ...is perfect!

posted by CRShelley on January 14, 2008 at 10:18 PM | link to this | reply