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Well-written
This is just lovely~
posted by
NightMajik
on January 14, 2008 at 4:27 AM
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Very nice poem, well done! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 13, 2008 at 6:28 PM
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posted by
afzal50
on January 13, 2008 at 5:26 PM
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passengers all
in nature's symbiotic
calendar of sighs - a most powerful metaphor. Thanks.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on January 13, 2008 at 3:01 PM
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Very good
posted by
Kayzzaman
on January 13, 2008 at 11:30 AM
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Calendar of sighs...great line! Suggests a calendar of Autumn SIGHTS too
shalom from a manly and mildly feminine Laydi-Daydi
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on January 13, 2008 at 10:11 AM
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That was Great!
...and you have a way of making me hungry. (The honey visual, mmmm)
posted by
CRShelley
on January 13, 2008 at 9:57 AM
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