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Wow
You paint such amazing pictures and images with your words! Splendid.
posted by
NightMajik
on January 14, 2008 at 4:26 AM
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A lovely garden of thoughts turned word.
posted by
pen_dragon
on January 13, 2008 at 10:21 PM
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posted by
afzal50
on January 13, 2008 at 5:28 PM
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Kaz.................
I love your poem, but death is forever. I don't think I want to spend eternity lying on a bed of rocks. I want my therapeutic bed and and lots of blankets. lol
The poem is well-written and you are very talented. 
posted by
MaggieMae
on January 13, 2008 at 3:29 PM
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kazzyman
This is very deep
posted by
Lanetay
on January 13, 2008 at 11:52 AM
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This is a realy beautifull piece Kayzzaman! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on January 13, 2008 at 11:47 AM
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This is a perfect gem! The history, the imagery and the fragility of existence. I like this one tremendously. Thanks for the input on the epic poem. You were so right, now I can watch that in the future! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 13, 2008 at 10:19 AM
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earthly desire
unlace your dancing feet to see the beauty of death... beautiful verse! thank you for such depth in spirit!
posted by
bluebossa
on January 13, 2008 at 9:59 AM
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this poem moves from shadow Ln3 to beauty, faith, 'reborn' & flowers
thanks for this positive message! shalom from neil
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on January 13, 2008 at 9:49 AM
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Beautifuly written!
posted by
tyleness
on January 13, 2008 at 9:27 AM
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