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Thanks to all!
This was a modification of some writing I had done for my first NaNoWriMo. I was a little hesitant to share the experience as it felt so private when I was in it. I am glad I did.
posted by
bettybec
on January 14, 2008 at 10:16 AM
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I wrote a poem similar to this about two years ago, bettybec, but took
a different direction. Well done. The imagery is excellent.
posted by
saul_relative
on January 13, 2008 at 9:54 AM
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Wonderful imagery !
posted by
ash_pradhan
on January 11, 2008 at 6:25 PM
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Your imagery's like a shot in a film as you rise toward the surface. Emotionally, we feel safe with you, under the water.
posted by
BC-A
on January 11, 2008 at 6:00 PM
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Very good, I adored the imagery. sam
posted by
sam444
on January 11, 2008 at 4:00 PM
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excellent job out of the blue good job thanks for sharing
posted by
spinner
on January 11, 2008 at 1:59 PM
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