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posted by afzal50 on January 10, 2008 at 5:43 PM | link to this | reply

very good.....

posted by star4sky5 on January 10, 2008 at 2:01 PM | link to this | reply

thats was, breath taking... very wonderful

posted by Katherine_Ann on January 10, 2008 at 1:39 PM | link to this | reply

really cool writing

posted by SomeoneElse on January 10, 2008 at 12:06 PM | link to this | reply

Surreal bt very well written indeed

posted by lindo on January 10, 2008 at 11:36 AM | link to this | reply

I really. . .
like this

posted by stbond on January 10, 2008 at 11:28 AM | link to this | reply

Kayzzaman
Reads like one of Grimm's Fairy Tales. 

posted by TAPS. on January 10, 2008 at 8:44 AM | link to this | reply

An excellent poem Kayzz
very well written; thank you

posted by mariaki on January 10, 2008 at 7:56 AM | link to this | reply

The lesson to be learned here is the howling echo of understanding. This is so very well written!  sam

posted by sam444 on January 10, 2008 at 7:55 AM | link to this | reply

go for it - my mystery poet!Very pos+ even if humans disappear b/c IMMORTAL
souls will continue here in Creation. Why should we be so attached to the material, bodily form, when we think, dream and pray immortality which is already in our spirit-souls? SHALOM from Neil

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on January 10, 2008 at 5:41 AM | link to this | reply

I enjoyed this.....

posted by Corbin_Dallas on January 10, 2008 at 4:59 AM | link to this | reply

Absolutely a compelling read.

posted by SeshuWho on January 10, 2008 at 4:51 AM | link to this | reply

That's absolutely beautifull Kayzzaman! Chris.

posted by Scramble on January 10, 2008 at 4:36 AM | link to this | reply