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Re:
Thank you much
posted by
NightMajik
on January 14, 2008 at 4:25 AM
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Re: wow.....
Thanks star~~
posted by
NightMajik
on January 14, 2008 at 4:25 AM
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Re: Great Job!
CRShelley, thanks for your comment. Your comment is a bit like poetry itself!
posted by
NightMajik
on January 14, 2008 at 4:24 AM
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Re: Awesome
Hi LostInLife, sorry for my late reply. Thanks so much for your lovely comment on this, I'm glad it reached you. I put a lot of my heart into it, so I guess some probably bleeds over into reading. Many hugs to you, for this 'sickness' we share.
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NightMajik
on January 14, 2008 at 4:24 AM
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Thanks very much, sam!
posted by
NightMajik
on January 14, 2008 at 4:23 AM
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Re: Wonderful.
Thank you so much
posted by
NightMajik
on January 14, 2008 at 4:23 AM
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Re: Very interesting
Thank you, kayzzaman~
posted by
NightMajik
on January 14, 2008 at 4:23 AM
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Re: NightMajik
Hi TAPS., thanks for your lovely comment. There was a lot going through my head when I wrote this, so I'm glad it inspires others to think just as much. Love your lilypad analogy. =333
posted by
NightMajik
on January 14, 2008 at 4:22 AM
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posted by
KaBooM62
on January 12, 2008 at 1:20 AM
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wow.....
posted by
star4sky5
on January 11, 2008 at 7:09 AM
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Great Job!
Original writing style. Peaceful soul singing to make the pain submit.
posted by
CRShelley
on January 10, 2008 at 1:26 PM
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had to come read it again
Another true - to me anyway - the one we want is the one we can't have...
posted by
SomeoneElse
on January 10, 2008 at 11:52 AM
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Awesome
And oh how so perfectly true and unfair. My favorite of yours, bar none! Such a shame isn't it and the sickness you speak, I feel it often. The epitemy of irony spelled out perfectly and completely on the mark! I could go on and on. The style, new to me and I love it, orginal and smooth flowing, the punctuation and all was as beautiful as the meaning behind the words. Guess I'll stop now... Great Writing!
posted by
SomeoneElse
on January 10, 2008 at 8:45 AM
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I liked your thoughts, the presentation of the poem kept me in the meaning and imagery so peacefully. sam
posted by
sam444
on January 10, 2008 at 7:42 AM
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Wonderful.
posted by
SeshuWho
on January 10, 2008 at 4:44 AM
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Very interesting
posted by
Kayzzaman
on January 10, 2008 at 4:44 AM
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NightMajik
What an interesting post. There is so much in it to think about. It was like hopping from one lilypad to another and enjoying the beautiful lilies along the way.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 10, 2008 at 4:15 AM
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