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where are your dreams my friend, you are much to young to feel such feelings, hang in there, I can not say I feel your pain, every bodies pain is different, wish there was something I could say to make you feel better, maybe it is your own words that make you feel better, I hope that is the case. may the holy spirit pass over you and feel your void may seeds of hope sprout in your garden of pain, choking out the weeds of darkness, so that your garden grows happiness, God Bless
posted by
spinner
on January 6, 2008 at 11:57 AM
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Sounds like a cry...
...of pain. Well written if it's not true. And I hope it's not
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posted by
b2008
on January 6, 2008 at 8:59 AM
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God is great . Have faith in Him and you will feel better !
posted by
afzal50
on January 6, 2008 at 7:08 AM
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MY WORD
I am 19 and I started writing when I was 12 and I remember going through my teenage years and I think the only thing that stopped me from doing anything to myself was writing it down and thinking about the people around me. I can feel you words so there for you've made my list :):)
posted by
Shanlizer88
on January 5, 2008 at 10:42 PM
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Very Good!
Hey!.... I Love Your Style! Keep it UP!
posted by
CRShelley
on January 5, 2008 at 9:58 PM
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