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You do write so well Hagi...I'm impressed.  will be back later to pick up...keep writing and have patience, I'm reading ~Elyse

posted by elysianfields on March 27, 2008 at 7:51 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Hagi, I read somewhere on a post of yours
Well, one of examples of "Latvian grammar" might be the way I start the sentences with "Because" and overall split the sentences in two if I feel like running out of breath, my built-in English editor suggests that it's wrong. In Latvian, it is quite alright, not perfect, but still good. Latvian grammar is different also because there is no certain order of words in a sentence (we can say "can we say" and "say can we" without being mocked as Star Wars fans, just giving different undertones for the sentence), perhaps I use this in English, too (although in school they drilled the correct order for English words pretty much, even my 5 years old son, who knows just some words in English, can construct "gibberish" sentences in English - right word order, absolutely no sense).

posted by hagi on January 8, 2008 at 2:21 AM | link to this | reply

Hagi, I read somewhere on a post of yours
that English is your second language and you bend the rules to include Latvian

turns of phrase. I like the way you write, and the feeling of being drawn along

 on a journey. And i enjoy the way you weave in myths and old stories.

posted by Azur on January 7, 2008 at 7:19 PM | link to this | reply

coooollllll

posted by star4sky5 on January 1, 2008 at 10:21 AM | link to this | reply