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Kayzz
A lot going on here! Keep it coming. I enjoy breaking down your verse.
Be well,
-smartdog
posted by
smartdog_670
on December 29, 2007 at 9:56 PM
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CONTAGION PUBLISHING, would like to wish you a happy & safe new year!!! We will return in 2008 with books 3, 4, 5, & 6. Thank you from the bottom of my heart, please keep reading!!!
CATCH THE INFECTION!!!!
posted by
contagion_publishing
on December 27, 2007 at 3:48 PM
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posted by
Soul_Builder101
on December 27, 2007 at 2:40 PM
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Kayzzaman
A word fitly spoken is like apples of gold in pictures of silver . --Proverbs 25:11
That is what I see when I read this poem.
posted by
TAPS.
on December 27, 2007 at 11:03 AM
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Very entrancing poem.
posted by
hagi
on December 27, 2007 at 10:10 AM
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posted by
star4sky5
on December 27, 2007 at 9:11 AM
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Drenched in your poem.Superb.
posted by
SeshuWho
on December 27, 2007 at 8:39 AM
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Well expressed !
posted by
afzal50
on December 27, 2007 at 7:55 AM
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The use of enjambment was perfect. The punctuation was at the most opportune times. And then 'Who knows who they are and where there God has sent them', plus 'To swallow a handful of sky from the bowl of the receding dusk' are absolutely fabulous lines to compliment this beautiful sonata. Good for you!!!!sam
posted by
sam444
on December 27, 2007 at 5:25 AM
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You have some very magical lines in this poem...wonderful!
posted by
Ariala
on December 27, 2007 at 4:32 AM
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