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posted by afzal50 on January 12, 2008 at 4:42 AM | link to this | reply

Well Done!

posted by CRShelley on January 12, 2008 at 4:21 AM | link to this | reply

no

it is just a poem , im not sure i could tell you what its about,but it can be whatever you want it to be about

thanks for reading and reviewing i appreciate it. having problems with the site my recent posts are appearing way back down arnd dec 24-25 instead of jan

thanks again

posted by twomany on January 12, 2008 at 2:08 AM | link to this | reply

Isn's this about ultra-dependency?

posted by Straightforward on January 12, 2008 at 1:54 AM | link to this | reply

Painfully graphic, twomany. Well done...

posted by saul_relative on January 7, 2008 at 8:31 AM | link to this | reply

oh two ,any.........it sounds so genuine....

posted by star4sky5 on January 6, 2008 at 5:44 PM | link to this | reply

twomany,

This is excellent work. I loved it!

posted by SpitFire70 on January 6, 2008 at 12:43 AM | link to this | reply

i find this

very beautifully written, indeed you look far beyond

posted by jesse_jean on January 5, 2008 at 1:17 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful ! WEll said !

posted by afzal50 on January 5, 2008 at 8:12 AM | link to this | reply

Expressive and seeking, two good thoughts to take from this poem. It feels like dire straits but evokes hope throughout. sam

posted by sam444 on January 5, 2008 at 6:09 AM | link to this | reply

this poem is not about what I am going through

it is just a poem and when i started writing the thought of suicide had nothing with bleeding at the wrists , in my mind any way.

THANKS FOR THE WORRY AND CONCERN. I WOULD NEVER CUT MY WRISTS ESPECIALLY OVER SOMEONE ELSE.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

posted by twomany on December 30, 2007 at 5:18 AM | link to this | reply

Seedling

I've never been in love like that where I wanted to hurt myself and I hope I never will. Life is too precious to give it up for a fool!

posted by b2008 on December 27, 2007 at 9:41 AM | link to this | reply

Too sad are the only words to express!

posted by b2008 on December 27, 2007 at 9:39 AM | link to this | reply

Two

So very, very sad....

posted by Troosha on December 26, 2007 at 9:04 AM | link to this | reply

Write again, we are here to read you.........

Merry Christmas........

posted by star4sky5 on December 25, 2007 at 9:06 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful and bold

posted by Kayzzaman on December 25, 2007 at 4:37 AM | link to this | reply

Twomany

I have tatoos across my wrists with the name of a certain person who couldn't, wouldn't listen nor feel me. It's hell being in love and discovering 'love' is experienced completely different by the person you sliced your wrists over.