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Excellent post, STORY MAN, but it runs way too long. Remember,
you're posting in a post-MTV world. If it takes longer than an average music video to do, it ain't getting done.  Word of advice, because I think what you've written is very important and needs to get to as many readers as possible: edit this piece.  Break it up into smaller peices, such as one on mercury, one on radiation, etc.  This will be more effective and build your readership.  Just a suggestion (you can disregard if you want), but I really think you have something important to say and this will be a more effective way to reach more people.  Besides, you'll make more money...

posted by saul_relative on December 21, 2007 at 11:24 AM | link to this | reply

Please do not post long, otherwise efforts will go in vain

posted by Kayzzaman on December 21, 2007 at 8:51 AM | link to this | reply

posted by afzal50 on December 21, 2007 at 7:53 AM | link to this | reply