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salty stabs
your poetry emerges from your soul.  what a gift!

posted by bluebossa on December 25, 2007 at 4:42 PM | link to this | reply

Poignant, NightMajik...

posted by saul_relative on December 20, 2007 at 10:42 PM | link to this | reply

WOW, nm. This is good stuff...sorry of it's tough memories.U captured the

conundrum, the symbiosis of love and non-love, presence-absence, bitter-sweet ...hope the shredding stops (i can't take too many more shards!). Very vivid, courageous writing.

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on December 20, 2007 at 6:28 PM | link to this | reply

thanks for reading, may you have a great holiday season!!

posted by contagion_publishing on December 20, 2007 at 11:49 AM | link to this | reply

Hey
Liked it alot...

posted by SomeoneElse on December 20, 2007 at 11:24 AM | link to this | reply

Very nice

posted by Kayzzaman on December 20, 2007 at 8:46 AM | link to this | reply