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hello asphixiated
your poem is very well done and if I may say it brought to mind, the style of the militant poet Zack De La Rocha....as well as the message of the band Tool.
posted by
mysteria
on December 20, 2007 at 8:40 AM
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This is worth the read. Happy Holidays.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on December 18, 2007 at 7:59 AM
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WEll said !
posted by
afzal50
on December 18, 2007 at 4:56 AM
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Good effort
posted by
Kayzzaman
on December 18, 2007 at 4:56 AM
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It's not too far, but in your heart and thoughts
paradiseis near if some one try the best......
posted by
star4sky5
on December 18, 2007 at 3:32 AM
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